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Red Tears falling like ketchup

The knife that wounds and marks called love

By Marie381Uk Published 7 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Red Tears falling like ketchup

She didn’t weep like others do

no sobs, no gasps, no reaching through

just silence, thick as drying paint

no hero here, no saint

He didn’t break a heart, just that

he broke the mirror, frame, and mat

he cracked the voice, the spine, the song

made right feel foul, made calm feel wrong

Red tears slipped slow, they stained her face

not pink, not soft — no saving grace

like ketchup down a paper plate

too cheap, too warm, too full of hate

She sat, unmoved, she didn’t shout

she let the full red silence out

a thousand cuts he couldn’t see

and none of them would set her free

A broken woman, inside and out

he killed her spirit, left her in doubt

Will she recover? Will she be alright?

Yes, but it’s going to be a long, sad fight

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Andrea Corwin 7 months ago

    Fabulous! My fave lines are: He didn’t break a heart, just that he broke the mirror, frame, and mat he cracked the voice, the spine, the song Unusual to include all of that, like the "mat" and "spine." The red like ketchup - great descriptions!!

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