
shone like inkling twilight
Your large saucer eyes fill my mouth with ladled cream
For no one else this poet writes of
With galaxy spirals and moonshine silks
That soak red into my green grass soul
An elixir you mixed up in a crystal ball
With luminous beams that helped heat it up with our dreamscapes and frantic air clouds of secret pinging whispers
The one you masterfully penned,
You wrote our destiny in stars,
One star, one audience
For you
I stare across your billowing platform
Your heart I so long to have
My willow jade leaves soon scuttle along the bay,
Tattered, but whole inside to swoon to be across your milky expanse
Only because of one, you,
Moon Milk Eyes π
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Superb!!!πππ