Red fall
Red fall slumbers in the past
Future’s end is in the ticking of a frozen beauty,
So lost in the timbers of solemn vow
Linked to a hearkened cry of the Seraph,
The reason of the two climbers
Descent is not due to gravity
But for believing in
the patience of the mountain
Red fall is awaiting them,
Deep, lush brooks with sprinkles of tinged and painted brush and leaves leftover from hot summer sun swimming along...
Is there room for the two climbers to dream?
Will the red fall capture what was once lost?
Red fall slumbers in the past
Catching the first bits of love, all lonely and burnt orange and ruby red
And letting it stay another season.
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By S. A. Crawford5 days ago in Fiction
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You always manage to write lines that make me go whoa! Like this "The reason of the two climbers Descent is not due to gravity But for believing in the patience of the mountain." Excellent
This is absolutely breathtaking! The ending fits and ties everything together so well - amazing job!
Will the red fall capture what was once lost. I loved that line so much! Beautiful poem Merly!
The beauty of fall heading into winter when it is good for love to remain for another season. It's nice to have someone with which to snuggle.
Fabulous!!! Loved it!!!
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I love this so much. Your ending line wraps everything up so beautifully, and your prose is magic.