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A Play On Poe

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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once inside a midnight dreaming

bored and ornery I was scheming

deeds and paybacks for some brokenhearted love

while I wondered, deeply pondered

of the time I'd sorely squandered

listening to the gentle warning of a mourning dove

came a cawing, someone bawling

so enthralling, it sent me crawling

down the damp, dark hallway with a force much like a shove

there was sitting, unremitting

ravens sipping something dripping

from the open attic door and the ceiling up above

though completely unaware

and through a deep and steely stare

lay tiny partial pieces of my faithless former lover

awakened from a midnight dreaming

with smiley faces on my ceiling

revealing my concealing's that I've hidden undercover

For Funheartbreakhumorsurreal poetry

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Randy Baker2 years ago

    Well done! The playful rhythm somehow makes this even more disturbing but in a good way. lol

  • Nice twist on the Poe original. It’s not easy to keep that same rhythm and rhyming scheme that he did while also maintaining the spirit of the imagery but making it a different kind of heartbreak. Well done.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Lol. This is great.

  • And may this never be used as evidence against you. Though it is fun to dream with a little whimsy now & then, isn't it, my friend? Lol.

  • Loved the Poe theme. Have you seen the movie The Pale Blue Eye

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    I love this! This felt very Poe-like :)

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Wow, this is so intriguing.

  • Fantastic poem’ ❤️

  • Test2 years ago

    Nicely done.

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