I once heard a rat-a-tat-tat
from the wall by my bratty fat cat -
I called our rodent control,
I learned rat traps would cost me my soul...
but ya know? That beat seemed to slap so I spat a mad rap with that damn ratty-rat.
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-Gina C.🧚♀️✨
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Author's Note: Yes, I became friends with the rat in my wall. We made some ill jams together that year he lived rent-free in my apartment.
Also: this is not a proper limerick. It is a Gina C.-style limerick. ☺️
This was written for the Ludicrous Limerick Challenge. :)
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Thank you so much for reading! ☺️ I'm working really hard to grow my community on Vocal, so if you enjoyed this short limerick, I'd be over the moon if we could be friends and support each other here!
I reciprocate all comments, hearts, and subscriptions. :) ❤️
About the Creator
Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
Comments (27)
🤣 Just came across this post now! Very funny.
Simply gorgeous. Wish everyone tried to grow communities, only few do. I try so hard, they say thank you and move on, not a reciprocation in sight, except for a few faithful souls. They have no idea the joy of tit for tat, Sigh, Keep doing Gina.
Fabulous!!!💖💖💕
Love the Rhythm🥰🙃
🤣 Gina-C Style it is. I Love it!!! Especially the line. "But ya know? That beat seemed to slap." Can't beat it join it! Great stuff!
Fantastic work and the artwork to accompany it is perfect.
Wow that's a great one there 👍👍.
haha, this was fun! Maybe the next vocal challenge is going to be Gina C. style limericks! 😆
That was amusing and the image is a perfect compliment 😄
That was fun and very much your own
Your story was both amusing and charming and appreciated the creative spin on the traditional limerick format.
Rat traps would've been a helluva bill On the emotional bank, it takes a lot to kill More than the check, it's less than the money roll It's all about the mental state, that kind of toll So You gotta follow Your heart, and just let the rest fill
Loved this Gina C. style limerick! And I'm so happy you and the rat became friends! That's so sweet! Also, there's a Pokemon called Rattata which then evolves into Raticate!
Gina C- style is the best style!! This was such a blast!! I always enjoy how you make every piece uniquely yours. Loved it, my friend :)
Such good fun! I love the uniqueness of this and the picture is the bom-diggety.😎
Very good Gina!
That was really good
Definitely a performance all the way!
So funny and original... Only as Gina can do!!!
Play the tap gina lol I love it ❤️
Go Gina! (Air beat) go go go Gina! Love it 🥰😂
I am such a Gina C.-style fan 😁❤️😁… and better a rat than a roach!!
I recalled Remy from Ratatouille. So I believe ya, rats are pretty capable!
I love the Gina C flair added. :)
hahaha :) Nice!