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Rape

Based on The Girl with the Dragon the Tattoo

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Rape
Photo by Jr Korpa on Unsplash

I am the ghost Rebecca case,

Don't you obsess over it, over me

I am the ghost that haunts with real blood and fire-breath

I am the case that can not be cracked

My blood lies in a dried-up pool beneath my feet
I scream until the screams run out of me

I dream until the dream runs out of me

I run until the running is beaten out of me

You raped my mind, before my body

Yes, raped.

I felt dead in my veins as they were pressed into submission

Deep wells of a new person without a name

The name was whipped from her lips

Stale. False promises. Stale.

Inhale-Pinch-Cry stopped.

I am the case you will not crack.

Blackout

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Outstanding

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Top insight

  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Denelsia Walker2 years ago

    Masterpiece ✨✨✨✨✨

  • Tina D'Angelo2 years ago

    Congratulations on the Top Story!!

  • Cheryl E Preston2 years ago

    Very sad. It elicits emotion. Thanks for sharing.

  • Kodah2 years ago

    I wanted to write a story about this same topic. But I didn't think Vocal would've approved it. Congratulations on your top story! This was powerful! 💌

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Haunting yet beautiful 🩷

  • Terrifying and thought provoking. Oh, and congrats on top story.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Wow. That is powerful. Congrats on the TS.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Really excellent and haunting work!!! Congrats, Melissa!

  • Liam Storm2 years ago

    Really powerful poem!! Very well deserved top story! Congrats

  • Gina C.2 years ago

    Oh my...your words are as powerful as ever here! This one will sit with me for a while. You are so talented :) Congrats on Top Story!

  • Dawnxisoul393art2 years ago

    Your words evoke a sense of empathy and admiration for your courage and tenacity, wonderful!

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    So emotional and utterly powerful.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story, Melissa. Was reluctant and then forgot to read this when it first was published. I think because of the subject matter - but as ever, you pull no punches, and stopped me in my tracks with the eloquence of your words. Powerful writing, Melissa! Well done!

  • Cheryl E Preston2 years ago

    This is a very inciteful poem. thanks for sharing.

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    feeling sad for your depression and anxiety I can feel you sending love 💓

  • I know what it feels to have your mind raped. I'm so sorry you went through this 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    I was a little nervous about reading this one. I hope that this never happened to you and that it is a way for you to work out these emotions on the page. But I thank you for this. A very powerful piece of work.

  • I have frozen in my reading tracks; it's so harsh and painfully penned. You pulled off the fine art of fear.

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