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Slain

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Slain
Photo by Fer Troulik on Unsplash

the sun switched on like a night light, ignited, now it’s been slain by his own mother

Split into two as an atom

The sunniest part melting down, like a soupy mess

Into the moon

Lighting her up

Like a new lover

The star below, her new supply of narcissism

Craved deliverance.

“You once told me you loved me,” the star cried.

“Do not lie, I never did.”

The pain of being so viscerally slain

Was like rebirth, so painful

Wretched, alone

More alone than any living creature on the earth,

Agony stretching her star-veins.

surreal poetryheartbreak

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • The Protagonist Priestess2 years ago

    Dark poetry at its finest. Loved this!

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    This is definitely a dark poetry . Excellent work.

  • Whoaaa, this was so surreal, intense and emotional. I loved it! Also, you always find the most awesome pics on Unsplash and it often makes me think what did you have to type to find these pics hehehehehe

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