Rain of Ash and Acid
A Poetic Journey Through Nature's Deadly Rain

It fell from skies, a burning stain,
A toxic hiss, the acid rain.
Clouds of steel, bruised and black,
No mercy held, no turning back.
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Each drop a wound, each splash a scar,
That sears the earth and rots afar.
It eats through stone, corrodes the trees,
Turns rivers foul, poisons seas.
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The air itself, a choking blight,
No breath escapes the sulfur night.
Flesh peels back, raw and red,
As acid rain marks its dead.
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Beneath its touch, the cities weep,
Concrete crumbles, shadows seep.
Windows melt in fiery pools,
As nature mocks mankind’s tools.
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The screams are swift, dissolved away,
In puddles black where bodies lay.
A ghostly mist hangs in the breeze,
Of twisted limbs and burnt-out pleas.
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Silent streets, scarred and bare,
Where life once thrived, there's none to care.
The acid rain claims all in sight—
No shelter left from endless night.
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So heed the warning, stay inside,
From skies where unseen terrors bide.
For when it falls, it leaves no trace—
But ash and ruin in its place.
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This is a story poem that in a way could introduce a chemistry lesson in a creative way. Good work.
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