Rain Clouds and Yellow Cars
For Kenny Penn's Challenge
Precipitation—
Humble clouds spread tears of joy
Their love, absolute
Rain streaks down windows...
Dosed trees rejoicing beyond...
Which dictates the mood?
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A/N:
Chained with Lamar's great entry! (I think I did this right....)
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Matthew J. Fromm
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Here there be dragons, knights, castles, and quests (plus the occasional dose of absurdity).
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Comments (9)
Beautifully done and food for thought 🧐
Great chain entry and extension to Lamar’s first stanza!
This chain is so fun, even though I'm getting a bit confused occasionally 😁
There it is!!! Love the contrast of perspective. And yes, you did it right. A perfect compliment.
Oh but I do love this so much. Such a well-honed visual in so few words.
Fantastic, Matthew! I love the visual of the rain streaking on the window, so peaceful
Excellent one matheww
Lovely in its own right.
Power in succinctness! Lovely!