Rabbits
For the sky-ku challenge
Photo by Kym MacKinnon on Unsplash
At night, rabbits fly
in talons’ grasp; eyes reflect
their kin in the moon
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Comments (16)
Oh no! The rabbits are taken at night😞 Great haiku! Congratulations on the TS🎉🥳
This left me breathless for a moment.
I loved this. Awesome perspective.
Wonderful! Well done on TS!
Rabbits fly?
gruesomely beautiful, like a Hosier song. Congrats on your top story
Wonderful lyrical description of the magic of rabbits. Well wrought and delightful to read. Congrats on the TS
I love bunnies yet nature runs it's course. Congratulations on Top Story
Congratulations! For the story and this imagination that has come to your mind, that's why. Their kin on the moon, wonderful
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It's beautiful and sorrowful. Well done.
such an amazing piece
That felt magical! Great job
Gripping imagery (no pun intended). I can imagine those lifeless eyes.
Beautifully done. Congrats on the TS.
Rabbits fly . It works and is has a magic to it