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Punchtuation in a Judynation

By BrenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Question Mark
Photo by Emily Morter on Unsplash

is it too late

to get

a thing

going

or is it

too old

to be new

too late

i asked

i got told

and made to wait

i passed

became cold

and played with fate

i guess

you could say

that it’s different

this way

but not much

else here

has changed

you might think

despite the nearness

of the brink

politely fearless

and bereft

of regret

smilingly serious

and maybe mildly

upset?

is it too soon

to want to bring on

the next

two suits

of drama

to our scene

a new moon

familiar tune

muttered sighs

glazed of eyes

semi contented surprise

and a host of bold lies

pimped and dressed up

as ever ready

alibis

Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Belleabout a year ago

    Great flow! The readers read fast on this one! A great stream of consciousness.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    'Is it too late to get a thing going' I wonder that all the time. You always get me thinking.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    You have such a distinctive voice, love this

  • Jumbo Slice about a year ago

    I enjoyed the flow of this. Good job!

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