Provenance
Perpetual creation in motion
By Lamar WigginsPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Marc Szeglat on Unsplash
About the Creator
Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Comments (11)
These haikus are great! I hate I missed the before. You know, for someone who claims they had never written a haiku before, you REALLY did a great job!! I'd written some in high school but enjoyed the challenges. LOVED this!
I agree with J. R. Lowe, the imagery here is awesome! I also love the personification of the volcano waking. It's also really cool to see magma treated in a more positive light as a form of creation rather than only destruction. Great haiku!
Beautiful imagery. Very nicely done!
Nicely done.
Dope.
This is beautiful and a wonderful, unique take I have not yet seen!! That first line is 😍 and I love the way you worked it. LOVE!!!
Loved it!
This was so brilliant!
This is great.
Oh, you had with me that first line - gold! Loved the whole thing, great work!
That’s awesome 😀