Clear, pristine waters;
Wrapped in the arms of mountains.
Drinking in the view.
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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Niche topic & fresh perspectives
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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"Hear Me Out"
"Hear me out, what if we ran away together?" "Where do you want to go?" "Anywhere but here. We could move to a new city or to Canada, or we could disappear from society to live in the middle of the woods. Maybe a combination of two of those things would be good. What do you say?"
By Kay Husnick7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (15)
Lovely Cathy ! 🥰
Fresh ❤️🫶🏾❤️❤️👍
I just love this poem, especially the last line!!!
Lovely :)
Beautifully written! I could almost hear and see the water.
This is brilliant Cathy.
Well done
Yes! Incredible
Beautiful imagery! Well done.
This was so gorgeous and very surrealistic!
I felt refreshed after reading this one :) Lovely poetry.
I love the "wrapped in arms of mountains" part! Wonderful job! I have a haiku up as well if you'd like to take a look :)
Fabulous 💖💕😊💖
Beautiful photo to go along with the well-written poem.
You're so gifted! This piece is very very Beautiful!!