Presumption Stumbled
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I stumbled into an artist’s apartment,
the door was mostly open,
on an easel, I saw a completed piece.
A wide-eyed cat, startled by my presence, knocked over a coke bottle which hit the floor and spilled.
A fire truck raced by in the distance;
there wasn't anyone in the apartment at all.
Where had the artist gone?
There was a floral smell in the air
and I wondered what it was exactly.
I stepped toward the painting,
sniffing the canvas impulsively.
The floral smell was coming from the canvas.
Scented paint?
I walked toward the kitchen and there was a bowl of fruit on the table.
Taking a banana,
peeling it, I started to eat it as it had been several days since I had eaten.
Walking out the door of the apartment,
I closed the door.
Quietly, I said thank you aloud for the banana that I had stolen,
and for the glimpse of the floral smelling canvas painting.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (3)
Trippy
Haha, I loved this! Felt like I stumbled into a dream. Sometimes life surprises us when we least expect it.
What a great nod to Cindus' talent as an artist! Love the story and there's a lot of symbolism in the door being open. When we create, we're leaving the door of ourselves open and people can peek inside. It's a special vulnerability that can be daunting and yet sure at the same time. He created us to create.😇Great job-