Pressure
A Vocal+Assist Writing Prompt Challenge on Blood Pressure
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This Week I Have Been Counting Down
By My Side You Are Beautiful
Blood Pressure Was Rising, Unbound
But You Calmed Me, Made Me Peaceful
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The Numbers Fell, Blood Pressure Fell
Your Gentle Touch Felt Beautiful
Your Perfect Love, I'd Love to Tell
How You Soothe Me, So Loveable
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The Pressure Dropped, You're Beautiful
The One For Me, So Suitable
Holding Hands, Blood Pressure Stable
When You're With Me, Feel I'm Able
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To Always Succeed And Reach My Goal
For Both Of Us Now, Never Fall
You Love For Me Is Beautiful
Our Future, Forever Fruitful
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Mike Singleton π Mikeydred
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Comments (6)
Very nicely done. Love it.
A wonderful take on the challenge!!
Omgggg, I'm at awe at how wrote a beautiful poem about blood pressure. You are absolutely fantastic! I mean the only thing that comes to my mind for blood pressure is, hypertension, reduce salt, hypotension, stress, atrery, veins, etc. Lol!
Very nicely done
That is really nice. Great set of rhymes.
Great job! Love your βbeautifulβ rhymes :)