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Present Day

For Vocal’s “Light Breaks Water” Challenge

By Hannah E. AaronPublished 6 months ago Updated 6 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Light Breaks Water Challenge
Present Day
Photo by Jessica Cogar on Unsplash

Years ago, when you walked me across

the field while horses still grazed, I didn’t

see our future: the cabin sprouting

from the existing shack, wood-paneled

and stone-worked and windowed by your hands

mornings where we woke up

to thick fog carding through tall grass

russet does preferred for hiding their fawns;

afternoons watching you run with your white-and-liver spaniels,

you all so brightly lively—lovely—against

the field’s green; that I would be there

with you, sitting on the porch and warm

from summer and contentedness on the land

you were excited to buy and share with me.

I didn’t see that future then, and I’m

grateful I lack the clairvoyance that could

have cheapened the wonder of being

married to you.

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About the Creator

Hannah E. Aaron

Hello! I'm mostly a writer of fiction and poetry that tend to involve nature, family, and the idea of growth at the moment. Otherwise, I'm a reader, crafter, and full-time procrastinator!

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  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    This was beautiful, it made me smile. Congratulations on placing in the challenge 👏

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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