Predator … Pray
For the breakup nonet challenge
Armed with your sharpest deadly weapons
You set out on your safari
Skillfully you tracked your prey
Sighted, took careful aim
Let loose a volley
Poisonous words
Strike my heart
Bullseye
Dead
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XDNAAS91e1A&pp=ygUfc2hvdCB0aHJvdWdoIHRoZSBoZWFydCBib24gam92aQ%3D%3D
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Comments (4)
Gosh some people are definitely those kinda predators. Loved your poem!
Nice analogy Andrew- ouch! 👏😁
That was great, and so brutal..well done.
Now that’s tough.