Precisely Dessert
Christmas π π π in July ππheads up Santa Claus...
Dear, Saint Nick
Dine me,
To a delightful dessert...
I know that my Mom
Made them for you...
I can not control my resistance to the thought of them being chocolate and Gooey.
I wouldn't ask for a present this year...
But if you are insisting
Can you please mandate
My one desire,
to
Share
Those
Delicious desserts with you?
I love the smell
Of freshly baked yummies...
However, Mom made these, especially for you and I'll wait until twilight so that I could share some with you...
I Love the smell of Mom's Baked Yummies and Even Satisfactorily when they're in my Stomach...πβ€οΈπ
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Comments (12)
We canβt resist the sweetness of your poem. We crave more
I love this Lonzo, it's humour-filled and really speaks the truth of what everyone is thinking... screw Santa, those cookies are mine! π
This is just yummy. π
Sweet! π
Thank you! I'm hungry now! LOL!
Lovely!!! Definitely yummy!!! Loved ir!!!β₯οΈβ₯οΈπ
Mouth watering!
LOLπ«£oh no, my diet!! π
Lol I love Christmas but Iβm on a strict diet and the imagery of cookies is about to make me relapse! ππ
I am feeling hungry now!
Lol, now I want some of those cookies too π€£π€£π€£
Supercute! Just let me know when they're ready! I'll be right over!π LOL P.S. Santa heard my plea! My stomach has been shrinking the last 8 weeks! lol π