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Pre-Prepared, Pre-Packaged Pleasure

New Version of an Old Tautogram I edited in an entry for the Self-Editing Epiphany Challenge

By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Pre-Prepared, Pre-Packaged Pleasure
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Pre-Prepared Pre-Packaged Pleasure

Psychological Pulverisation

Physical Penile Pummelling

PIV

Pierced Perspective, Perception Poisoned

Pounded Pride, Potency Pilfered

Powerful Penetrations, Parting People

Practiced Patterns, Programmed Psyches

Proficient, Profound Perversion

Pounding, Pouncing

Private Pain

Producing Predators. Producing Prey. Pornography Persists

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Author's Notes: This is a new version of an old poem, which was actually the result of my third and final entry into the Self-Editing Epiphany Challenge. Links to both are below.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • angela hepworth8 months ago

    Such an important message, with such great alliteration! So well done!

  • And now I've read all three, lol.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji10 months ago

    good use of the letter p

  • Fatima10 months ago

    Thought-provoking piece with intense language usage.

  • D. J. Reddall10 months ago

    Potent poetic performance!

  • Calvin London10 months ago

    I think you need to go for a P. Sorry, Paul, I couldn't resist😊😊

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    Pounding, penetrating pornography persistent positive preparation positively perfect. Erotic to the core. Good job.

  • Caroline Craven10 months ago

    PPPPPPPERFECT!!!! damn - so many good P words in this!!! Well done!!

  • JBaz10 months ago

    Perusing Paul's Poetry persuades people positively Well done, I gave up after six words

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    love kp's answer. Jealous that I didn't come up with it ;) This version is great

  • kp10 months ago

    packs punch, paul

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