Pre-Prepared, Pre-Packaged Pleasure
New Version of an Old Tautogram I edited in an entry for the Self-Editing Epiphany Challenge
By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago • 1 min read
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Pre-Prepared Pre-Packaged Pleasure
Psychological Pulverisation
Physical Penile Pummelling
PIV
Pierced Perspective, Perception Poisoned
Pounded Pride, Potency Pilfered
Powerful Penetrations, Parting People
Practiced Patterns, Programmed Psyches
Proficient, Profound Perversion
Pounding, Pouncing
Private Pain
Producing Predators. Producing Prey. Pornography Persists
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: This is a new version of an old poem, which was actually the result of my third and final entry into the Self-Editing Epiphany Challenge. Links to both are below.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (11)
Such an important message, with such great alliteration! So well done!
And now I've read all three, lol.
good use of the letter p
Thought-provoking piece with intense language usage.
Potent poetic performance!
I think you need to go for a P. Sorry, Paul, I couldn't resist😊😊
Pounding, penetrating pornography persistent positive preparation positively perfect. Erotic to the core. Good job.
PPPPPPPERFECT!!!! damn - so many good P words in this!!! Well done!!
Perusing Paul's Poetry persuades people positively Well done, I gave up after six words
love kp's answer. Jealous that I didn't come up with it ;) This version is great
packs punch, paul