He sips from all flowers,
swears each one tastes like destiny—
same SWEETNESS, new LIE.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (5)
I love the bite of that last line!
Sharpe and punchy! 🤗
Awesomeness, always. You're amazing. And I'm big fan of how you use fonts. ⚡️💙 Bill⚡️
Sweet nectar with a sting in this ❤️ great job on this poem.
Now this is what I call a short yet powerful poem!