Poison Thorns of the Black rose
The rose of Death for some. Yet beauty to others..

Poison Thorns of the Black rose
It grew in silence,
under heavy skies,
a black rose shining
where nothing else survived.
Its petals were velvet,
its scent was a dream,
but hidden beneath it
were thorns sharp and mean.
A brush of the finger,
a careless, soft touch,
and the poison would linger,
its bite far too much.
So many were drawn
to its dark, lovely face,
never guessing the danger
that lived in its grace.
It stood in the shadows,
alone in the gloom,
a rose that brought beauty,
and also, a tomb
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (3)
Really, I felt nervous. My mind is saying something is missing. Finally, I came to know today that I wasn't replying to your post. Finally done.
Wow.. feeling fearful 🥺
This is beautiful!