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Poetry Inspired By A Picture

Challenge Entry #5

By Mariann CarrollPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Photo from facebook

Light breaks the water.

Sun reflection at the bottom.

Creatures worship it.

Light breaks the water.

What was hidden, now exposed.

Break all corruptions

Light breaks the water.

Light is like a healing song.

Bringing Harmony

Light breaks the water.

Why do we need light?

To Warm the corrupted hearts

Light breaks the water.

Light rescued you from the cold.

Keep warm, little one.

Light breaks the water.

Lost from what was taken

Let light help you find

Light breaks the water.

Does anyone understand?

Spiritual beings

Light breaks the water.

Truth is the reality.

Do not hide from it

Haiku

About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Susan Payton5 months ago

    This was so calming as well as beautiful. Nicely done Marianne. Just Beautiful.

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    This is lovely, Mariann. Well done!

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    Very lovely, Mariann <3

  • Leslie Writes6 months ago

    Ooh, this is a comfort. Look for the light.

  • Shirley Belk6 months ago

    You captured a moment of spiritual completeness.

  • Oh wow, that photo is stunning. Your poem complements the photo so well and it was so deep. I loved it!

  • Love the effect of the repetition, Mariann!

  • Beautiful, Mariann

  • peaceful words

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    This was so calming to read :-)

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