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Poet mourn thyself

A sensational death

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Is it selfish to mourn your own death, to pity that final breath, that last whiff of earthly perfume sublime?

Oh! last fateful kiss, to miss bless'd warmth of the embrace, the touch of cheek to cheek, face to face?

No more to hear lilting, lulling melody, sweet goddess Cecilia’s blessing?

Bitter, sweet, salt and sour, the heart’s desire of milk and honey, heady savour to tantalise?

Funny, how life’s candle dims, no more to see sun rise, close your eyes, do you mourn your own demise?

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Sensational it is! Great work, Ray.

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    very poignant and clever!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This is quite hauntingly lovely.

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    It is a lovely and thought-provoking poem.

  • J. L. Greenabout a year ago

    Well done and thoughtful!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is a good take on death in a way. Something to think about in a way.

  • I sometimes do, hehehe. This was an excellent take on the challenge! Loved your poem!

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Are you channeling the Romantics?

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    I imagine myself bellowing this to an audience to end act 2. Well done

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This is lilting and evocative poetry, Ray! Excellent entry to the challenge!

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