Pity Thoughts
The disappointments of being in love

At first, I was trying to save you.
Then I tried to save us both.
But then, reality sank in, and I realized we had to be willing to save ourselves.
Now, I only hope I'm not the only one trying to save myself.
It would be such a heartbreak
To learn you wouldn’t even save yourself to better love me.
As a woman, am I more man than you?
That I can do all things that strengthen me.
Yet, you continue to stay within that weakened state of mind.
Oh, honey such a pity.
We can be something more
We can be together as one.
But, it's ok.
Just love yourself a little more today.
About the Creator
Deborah Portillo
Writing from the edges of my imagination, I create stories for the simple pleasure of exploring what lies beneath the surface of ordinary life. Drawing inspiration from long workdays, unexpected dreams, and shadows of my own subconscious.


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