PINK LOVE
When Love stands Labeled with a Bright lacquer it Appears more Soothing...
Cool Cute,
Baby Pink, Warm;
- Dear, Love
Fell,
From Your span that lace memo zero Good.
Pale Love, Live...
Also, They Fell Free from Huge Hope 🙏 ,
Even Acid Fell Away from Calm City.
Aged With your kind word,
From warm Mars...
They tell, Have Love Near-
Push only, They want
open into-
Life.
With Cute Hope, They
Pull more into-
Love.
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This poem is my Entry to the Short and Sweet Challenge organized by Vocal in July 2023.
Theme: "Write a love poem using only words with four letters or less."
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Comments (18)
I loved the way the breaks brought home the point made in each line! Loved this! 😍
Gosh, this was so amazing! I loved it!
The short phrases, fragments of thought..., hypnotically mesmerizing (in the emphatic rather than redundant sense).
I love it with a flair of colour, Fantastic poem. Great job
Your poetry is divine, Lonzo!
Sweet but with an edge. Love it Lonzo.
so appropriate in this time of pink Barbiercore!
That was cute!
Dope, liked it a lot
<3 always a sweet treat
nice and inspiration
I love it 🥰
Well done!!! Agree with Tiffany in regards to the last two lines!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Nice work! I love the last line!
I love this one, Lonzo 💗
That is just lovely. Well done, as always.
This is amazing. A 5 letter word has snuck in 'Swell'
I love pink ! 💗