Pink Aurora
For the: Haiku/ Sky-ku challenge
By Caitlin CharltonPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Jonny Gios on Unsplash
My pink aurora
Reflect in my eyes, soul deep
Blush to revive me
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A/N thank you ever so much for reading. This is my very first attempt at a challenge, and I am very nervous but I had a lot of fun writing this. 💕
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Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (24)
My comment will not revive you. I just love pink and auroras. I feel reborn through your work —don’t tell anyone, but I read a few pieces — and I hope that one day we’ll become friends. Thank you for your time.
Nicely written Haiku. Well Done!!
Beautifully written Caitlin, a truly unique entry for the challenge!💕🌌
Love your art! ⚡♥️⚡
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Wow! I mean, that was my first attempt at a challenge too. I was, and still am quite nervous. Plus I think you did a way better job than me 😃❤ You've written wonderfully!
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Soul-stirringly gorgeous! Awesome work Caitlin!
I missed this one! It's so lovely. I will continue to read it many times.
And to think you were nervous about entering a Challenge Caitlin!! So I am going to paste below your Sky-ku: ‘My pink aurora Reflect in my eyes, soul deep Blush to revive me’ Read it from the point of view of another and appreciate how magnificent it is. A Sky-ku masterpiece. Now read the comments below again.And you will appreciate how you are admired by others. Absorb the comments. Feed off them to inspire. You are such a talented writer. And you give such insightful and detailed feedback - as I have been the recipient of. So by doing that as well you provide each author with their very oen Caitlin gift! You are a dedicated and much loved member of the Vocal community and I am so truely thankful to have connected with you! Pauline ♥️
Congrats, so lovely.
Congratulations on placing second on this week's leaderboard for Best Emerging Creator! This Sky-Ku is ever so lovely.
Congrats for placing for Emerging creators on the Bonus Board this week, Caitlin! Richly deserved!
so amazing
I love the image of eternity hinted at the reflection within the eyes.
Beautiful Caitlin!!!! I was debating writing one about the northern lights too!! You beta me to the punch though!! 😜
This was such a wonderful first attempt for a challenge! Soooo beautifully written and I absolutely loved it!
This is lovely! Very sweet (:
On a beautiful pink aurora canvas, I see your emotions dancing deep insight, in a breathtaking passionate blush that brings life back. Mesmerizing!
Simply beautiful in all respects and aspects.
Aurora in pink...lovely...lovely. First challenge. Lovely. Good luck, they tend to like abstract side-swiped stories for challenge wins as far as i can see. So this counts as one.
Truly amazing
This is the first Sky-ku challenge entry I have read and you have already set the bar high. I love all of it, but ‘Reflect in my eyes, soul deep’ is an especially powerful line. I love the personal connection you make with the phenomenon in your poem, Caitlin!
Oh, this is beautiful, Caitlin. Love that first line especially - drew me in! But really the whole thing is lovely! Well done! You can breathe a bit calmer now! :)