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Pieces of Peace II

burnt my feet but i made it!

By BrenPublished 23 days ago 1 min read
Pieces of Peace II
Photo by Jon Tyson on Unsplash

no

i'm not doing alright

but

i'm doing

what

i have to do

i'm doing

what

i need to do

i'm doing

it for me -

not you

...

one step

at a time

aint got time for feeling bad

and other self-indulgent greed

got no time to feel the sad

not my crop, not my seed

no

im not all the same me

not now

not anymore

ive walked one fire,

ive walked many

my head

is high

my heart

is strong

im letting me

fit in with me

and letting go

of all the wrong

this

is a good thing

inspirationalFor Fun

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Paul Stewart19 days ago

    This is very inspirational. I love how authentic you always are. Well done mate.

  • Determined 🩵

  • Inspirational and deep. Well done.

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