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You fall to pieces.
You say you feel beaten. But,
I see your beauty.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Writing reflected the title & theme
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Comments (13)
so sweet
Wonderful! I loved it ❤️
You pull on my heartstrings with your poetry. <3
Awesome all around.
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Fantastic imagery on this one. The image being the key to unlock the meaning is a deft touch.
Awww, this hit me hard. It was just so sweet!
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Beautiful visual and translates to so many things. ❤️
You are killing it!!!
Brilliant!!!💕💖😊
Love this💯❤️😉🎯🥰👍
Beautiful!! Well done, Cathy!! So uplifting and sweet at the end. ❤️
golden words my friend, truth 😃
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That was deep. You used the title and sub-title so effectively, and then the haiku slammed home. Excellent, my friend :)