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Pick me up to hold me again

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By KodahPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read

When I die,

Flowers will bloom upon my graveโ€”

Hold me close again~

~~~

;) - Kodah

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Kodah

- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical

~๐“ข๐“ฝ๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ฒ๐“ฎ๐“ผ ๐“ฌ๐“ช๐“ท ๐“ซ๐“ฎ ๐“ช ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฝ๐“ฝ๐“ต๐“ฎ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ฎ๐“น~

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Tiffany Gordon10 months ago

    Gorgeous! Go Kodah!

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    So lovely!

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Love โค๏ธ this!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I say leave them to grow, dont cut me short!

  • Kageno Hoshinoabout a year ago

    Love the writing

  • Jamye Sharpabout a year ago

    Love the implication that death springs forth anew in new life.

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Your writing is always so perfect. It's deeply emotional and always so elegant. Loved this!

  • Carrie about a year ago

    Beautiful and saddening!

  • Testabout a year ago

    I wish you health and longevityโ€”a spine-chillingly beautiful poem.

  • This was both poignant and hopeful. Loved your Haiku!

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    Melancholy and ominous--imagining is fine, and even fortifying, but we oughtn't to harm ourselves; the world has plenty of that in store for us in any event.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Sad but beautiful, Kodah. I hope you grace this world with your presence for a lot longer.

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