Phone call Phoenix’s rebirth
Can you reach me by a far away telephone booth? The haiku challenge of earth, fire, air and water. DHMIS tribute poetry
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Red escaping, trying to reach his family trapped inside of a time loop
Air
Wind dies as I scream,
This house is depriving us of air
(I love you)
***
Earth
Why can’t you answer?
The signal is cut, grounded
Earth trembles, I run.
***
Fire
The fire swallowed you up,
I’m stuck inside the empty volcano.
***
Water
I could die in water,
As long as I hold you
Reborn, Adam’s Ale.
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Comments (9)
Splendid 💕💖😊
Wowww, this was just so magnetic, your words seemed to pull me into it's depths! Loved this so much!
That is very deep Melissa.
NIce images, very good
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Beautiful piece, Melissa. Well done.
It felt like a story playing out which is really amazing based on how few words are there. I liked the nod to the show too :) Great work!
Geemaneee! So many great lines!!
Wow! This is so creative and unique, Melissa! I really love your approach here. 😍❤️
I love your words sis