phoenix wisdom, ii
second entry for "falling leaves"
By L.C. SchäferPublished 4 months ago • Updated 4 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Emmanuel Phaeton on Unsplash
last flame whispers to
the ground; red-gold shout before
winter's ash descends
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Comments (12)
Well deserved placing in the challenge… very clever haiku.💖
I love this so much!! Belated congrats in placing Runner-Up in the Falling Leaves Challenge, LC!!! 🎉
Beautiful imagery, LC; congratulations on your win!🍂
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Lovely depiction of transition. Congratulations on placing in the challenge 🥳
Love!
Omggggg, all three lines were brilliance in it's finest form!!
Beautiful
A last goodbye, if you will. Good job!
“Winter’s ash” has a certain imagery power to it.
This one has that sense of mourning. I love the way it pushes into a flame whisper. How we see it fall to the ground. Winters ash. I like the way you phrased that. Nice work L.C ❤️🤗
A/N - if you'd like to read my first entry, it's here: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/phoenix-wisdom%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">