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Phoenix Rising

Prey becomes predator

By Harper LewisPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Poetry of the Hunt Challenge
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The concupiscence gone

you don’t remember how to talk

to me or why you should,

having gathered enough of my nectar

to take back to your hive

and barren queen, you buzz

away. Air filled with electricity

becomes static and empty,

the shadows of the wheeling hawks

free falling through nothing,

landing flat on the ground,

Wing-shaped darkness

flying over grass and roots

without stumbling, the glide

never interrupted until

prey is sighted, then the plunge,

the nosedive, laser-focused,

talons curling into vulnerable flesh

that will be tenderized on impact,

dropped like me, lying on the

unforgiving earth, waiting

to be devoured.

But I rise, spread my wings,

and fly into my own hunt.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Goodness from that opening and that word I was reintroduced to, this was a great take on the challenge and I have no idea why it didn't place higher. Congrats on your Honourable mention tho.

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    I love your take on the challenge with this poem, Harper. Congratulations on your honorable mention❣👏

  • Test2 months ago

    Beautiful work! I’m speechless. ❤️

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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