Peel Me
Off With Your Freudian Slip!
Potassium empowered I let the tip of my tongue touch your sweet moist mushy...stop. I can't do this: bite you? This is new to us both. You are usually covered in chocolate, hidden in a smoothie so silky and luscious: right out bite you?
Alright.
Got ya! You thought I'd bite the tip, lol. I pierced your thick, yellow skin and peek-a-boo I see you! Did it hurt? Isn't that what you wanted? Banana Down Me-BDM? How does this work? You so fruity and kinda funky smelling after a few days. NO! I did not put those bruises on you so don't go screaming you didn't ask for it. Password? What password?
Given I'm the TOP and you can't move or talk how the hell do we have a password? You know what? You are a Freudian tease. I'm going back on the market and looking for some new fruit. Probably a pomegranate or I could do a fig. Just you lie there and think about this whole experience.
About the Creator
ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER
Admin. Vocal Social Society
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Comments (15)
A fruit that's ripe for the pun-takingπ Always good to read something that's punchy and witty!
Hahaha!!! I loved this! Very cleverly done!
'Tis a slippery slope once you begin to fall victim to its double entendre appeal.
lol, too funny, Andrea
Hahahahahhahahaha this made me laugh so much!
Haha! This was brilliant!!!
Haha. Oh my, that was fun.
This was everything I love! Witty, a bit suggestive and just plain fun :) Loved it!!
Oh the metaphors are to die for. Bananas get such a weird wrap, metaphorically speaking. ha ha...funny.
This was so witty and funny and clever!!
Well-wrought and highly amusing!
lol this gave me a good chuckle
I once formed a band called the Pink Bananas inspired by the Velvet Underground debut LP cover. Excellent story , and I love bananas
great title and poem
I sense a theme... π