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Peel Back My Layers

(a modern Villanelle)

By j.e.ridpathPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Villanelle Challenge
Peel Back My Layers
Photo by Adrien Converse on Unsplash

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin —

Religiously anatomize my body and mind;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Fervently flay my fascia and flesh — begin

Your devout exploration of denuded truth confined;

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin.

Faithfully extricate fibrous veins and sinews to pin

Hands in prayer, as around my wrists they bind;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Bravely bore into bones to meet marrow of ricin,

Where toxic plasma and blood cells are aligned;

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin.

Zealously sever my tongue where tales sensual spin,

And delicately dissect my cataract eyes, evil-blind;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Finally, extract my bleeding heart as it beats within,

Know your own — with my name in old-blood-ink signed.

Peel back the layers of my fire-blistered skin;

There, you will find both virtue and sin.

Villanellesurreal poetry

About the Creator

j.e.ridpath

"No mud, no lotus" - Thich Nhat Hahn

Author of "a curious dream", available now on Amazon: https://a.co/d/1JgqhMd

Blissful, euphoric

Moments; self-destructive storms -

In poetic form.

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Comments (8)

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  • Alison McBain2 years ago

    I could feel the strength of this poem as I read it. Well done.

  • J.P. Williamson2 years ago

    Congrats! Very powerful language.

  • Congratulations !

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    This exudes power. Congratulations on placing!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Congratulations on the runner up win!!!💕❤️❤️

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Congrats! Your word choice creates such a powerful tone throughout!

  • Oh wow, this was so intense and poignantly beautiful! Loved your Villanelle!

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