Passion, Like a House on Fire
Love, Like a Bird on a Wire

Passion like a house on fire
Burning with intense desire
Desire like a desert thirst
In you I have become immersed
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Immersed in voracious hunger
A yearning fierce, strong as thunder
Thunder with a crashing boom
Lightning flashes across the room
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Room for you here inside my heart
From you dear love, I’d never part
Part of my soul can now be yours
The want for you, felt in my core
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Core of my body is so weak
When you open your mouth and speak
Speak to all of my wants and needs
Inviting words, the desire feeds
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Feeds new blood to my drying veins
A gushing river of warmth sustained
Sustained for all eternity
My love for you, your love for me
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Me, lying in your strong arms
Smitten, succumbing to your charms
Charms, like an old golden ingot
Never to own since I have been cut
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Cut by a cold damaged heart
Whose cruelty pierced like a dart
Dart hurriedly from the room
Leaving you standing all alone
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Alone to wonder what went wrong
And why I know I don’t belong
Belong here with this fine man
Who makes me feel brand new again
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Again, just for a blink in time
I had all the words, all the rhymes
Rhymes from a heavenly choir
Healing psalms meant to inspire
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Inspire like cooing mourning doves
Potential there to find true love
Love, like a bird on a wire
Too far to touch, there to admire
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Admire like sunset on a beach
At the time when the horizon is breached
Breach the fathom that lies in between
You and me that cannot be seen
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Seen like the beauty that you exude
How I wish that I felt beautiful too
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (5)
This is wondrous. You are such an awesome poet. And you wrote me into this poem!!! You owe me royalties. Contact me. We'll discuss it. ⚡💙⚡
Awesome piece ✨💖😉💯
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I loved the form of this! It's not easy to do but you did so effortlessly and beautifully. Great work!
This was so beautiful! And the form of this poem reminded me of the Crown Cinquain
This is beautiful