Paper-Thin Thunder
A free-verse reflection on anxiety, love, and the delicate strength we find between lightning and echo.

Paper-Thin Thunder
The storm arrives
not with fists,
but with envelopes—
thin, trembling, addressed
to every quiet room inside me.
Clouds crease like paper cranes,
folding themselves into warnings;
I hold my breath
the way a spine holds a library,
afraid of the one book that slips.
Your name is lightning—
bright, brittle, immediate—
and all my courage is a window
taped in X’s, humming.
I pretend it’s music.
I have learned
How thunder can whisper
and still bruise the air;
How a heart can pass for porcelain
until it rings.
I want to be the oak,
root-drunk, rain-laughing—
But tonight I’m the leaflet
on a wet windshield,
clinging, unread.
Between strike and echo
There’s a mercy of seconds
where even fear is holy.
In that small interval
I iron the sky smooth
and swear—quietly—
to thicken my weather,
to turn this crumpled forecast
into something that doesn’t tear
when held.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (2)
Beautifully written,
This was honestly brilliant. Hooked from the first paragraph. Loved it. So visual and visceral. Possibly the best poem I've ever read on Vocal. Congrats.