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Paper-Thin Thunder

A free-verse reflection on anxiety, love, and the delicate strength we find between lightning and echo.

By Milan MilicPublished 3 months ago 1 min read

Paper-Thin Thunder

The storm arrives

not with fists,

but with envelopes—

thin, trembling, addressed

to every quiet room inside me.

Clouds crease like paper cranes,

folding themselves into warnings;

I hold my breath

the way a spine holds a library,

afraid of the one book that slips.

Your name is lightning—

bright, brittle, immediate—

and all my courage is a window

taped in X’s, humming.

I pretend it’s music.

I have learned

How thunder can whisper

and still bruise the air;

How a heart can pass for porcelain

until it rings.

I want to be the oak,

root-drunk, rain-laughing—

But tonight I’m the leaflet

on a wet windshield,

clinging, unread.

Between strike and echo

There’s a mercy of seconds

where even fear is holy.

In that small interval

I iron the sky smooth

and swear—quietly—

to thicken my weather,

to turn this crumpled forecast

into something that doesn’t tear

when held.

Free Verseheartbreakinspirationallove poemsMental Healthnature poetrysad poetrysocial commentaryStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetry

About the Creator

Milan Milic

Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.

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  • Novel Allen3 months ago

    Beautifully written,

  • Simon George3 months ago

    This was honestly brilliant. Hooked from the first paragraph. Loved it. So visual and visceral. Possibly the best poem I've ever read on Vocal. Congrats.

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