Paper Planes
A poem
Planes of paper.
Empty, not barren.
Patiently waiting
For cultivation.
Creased, etched, inscribed,
Torn in frustration.
Left to accumulate
Dust.
Piled high on desks.
Refuse.
Shelf warmer is better,
Best seller somehow not best.
Stained with ink in
Meticulous fashion.
Hoarded by collectors,
Disregarded by masses.
Save for those pages that
Serve them their lashes.
Paper planes fly,
Planes of paper inspire
Ink stains and confessions,
And unspoken desire.
About the Creator
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme




Comments (10)
Hi JD - I see you don't have much time; so I'll be brief: I'm so glad that I've just discovered your eclectic presentations. *As I scroll through them I've subscribed with pleasure - So terrific and a rarity to see 'original' presentations of late among the snippers with sharp scissors. Fun memory: My name was permanently embossed on the school V.P.'s office chair since I flew my folded airplane messages across the room with precision; pre digital age. I'm not a writer, just a retired legal professional; a simple storyteller to archive 'For the Kids Someday.' Not into contests or self promotion. I just enjoy doing my Silly Sketches to lead into my Shorts; nothing more. I will delete this in a few so as not to invade your privacy. I will be following your offerings. Jk.in.l.a. Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -
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Nice read - thanks for sharing this, John.
Lovely
Strange how paper planes and actual planes (and airports) inspire some of the same emotions noted here. Wonderful TS!
Awesome ✨ and Congratulations 🎉
It’s hard to pick a favourite line from this poem. Great work!
Impressive and inspirational!!! Loved this!!!
Definitely a spoken word achievement about a topic we can assort our lives with so promising. I applaud you for this incredible stance!!
Excellent Poem!!! So glad it made the Top Story!!!
Instant new subscriber. This is incredible! Congrats on Top Story!