Over the Valley
Craggy, bearded shadow
By Whimsical Wanderer Published 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Jeremy Bishop on Unsplash
Craggy and bearded
Its flank's shadow elongates
Embrace the valley
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Whimsical Wanderer
Narrative threads are everywhere, weaving through realms and stories. Words are vital vibrations, connecting us to deeper truths. I joyfully dance with them, co-creating tapestries of meaning that resonate beyond the page.
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Comments (16)
Beautiful.
New and delightful description. ❤️
Fantastic 💕
I like the part about the shadow best!
Thank you everyone! :-)
This is excellent! Very true to a real Haiku and beautiful! <3
well written!
really love the description of "craggy and bearded"
Beautiful! I really loved the “embrace the valley part” 🥰
Beautiful!
Reminded me of my grandfather.
Beautiful! I love this unique imagery.
Wonderful!!! Love it!!!
very nicely done.
Loved it! This does a wonderful job portraying the massive size and scope of these beautiful, rocky formations. Great work :)
Excellent haiku entry