Our Invisible thread
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The hearts are connected, and so are our Souls
Our existence, our memories, and maybe our Goals
Our names— different letters, our fate being One
I can see our Invisible thread—We're fated like None
.
You smile somewhere, I hide somewhere else
We're both in dreams; We're under sweet spells
We and only WE—No one Instead!
Our fingers are tied, with an invisible thread
.
But sometimes, I wonder — What if the thread pulls apart?
The thread won't alone break; It would break my Heart
So, I'll trace my side— I'll trace my broken thread
I'll leave footprints of my Blood in RED
.
Broken transparent thread will lead me to your way
I'll keep tracing your path, and will reach YOU one day!
Then I'll hold our broken Thread and I'll tie it again
My sadness will disappear, and so will my PAIN
.
And I know our thread would start to SHINE
'Cause you won't remain YOU—You'll become MINE
So I hope you take care of your side of our Thread
I'll follow your path and trace YOU, as I SAID
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A/N:
Fiction, Unreal, Imaginary!
Ok? haha, It's my Genre...
P.S. Do you guys know about "The Invisible Thread" theory?
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (10)
Ah! You really have a way with words. I love how your utilizing different text types!!
Really sweet poem to a destined love... "so I hope you take care of your side of our thread" 😊😍❤️🤩💚✨☀️
Loved your poem - And know our thread would start to shine- Well Done!!!
Loved the first verse - nice poem, Maryam.
"Footprints of my blood in red" "Your side of our thread" I especially loved those lines! As always, your poem was very relatable for me. It gave me strong vibes of Taylor Swift. And yes, I've heard of the invisible thread theory! In some places, it's also known as the red thread/string theory
wonderful rhyming scheme, lovely words <3
Beautiful job at capturing a romantics heart! 💜
So lovely and connects our hearts. So sweet imagery as well. Beautiful writing.
This is a beautiful yet so deep! Full of emotions It's a powerful and heartfelt imagery! Well written 👏 Idk about the invisible theory 😀
The perfect rhyming here makes the read so mythemic it's like a song. Great Poem!