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Oubliette

A Multi-stanza Senryu

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Oubliette by Tyr Johansen

You say none can know

Thus you come to me at night

No need to worry

……

Night is a cover

For a multitude of sins

If these walls could talk

…..

Welcome home my dear

Here no one will ever know

Of our passion

……

Perfect place for love

Hidden in the deepest night

Cold, dank oubliette

…..

I see you shiver

Come to me, let me warm you

I’ll make your blood boil

…..

Never mind the rats

They only nibble a bit

You get used to it

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Hahahahahahahahhaha the rats only nibble a bit! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Qurat ul Ainabout a year ago

    Such an amazing and lovely poem!!🤩👏

  • Sam Spinelliabout a year ago

    Wow. This is creepy in a subtle kinda way. Then there’s seething intensity at the end. Poetry can be read so many different ways and it might not be exactly what you intended but I interpreted this piece as a horror poem. Sounds like it could be a madman or a murderer talking to a victim. In any case, it’s very well written, and captivating in an uncomfortable way

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    Wow I love it

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Great poem! 💕

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