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The gnu who knew

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Justice!

I want to halve my cake and eat it, two

For twice as much makes it seem more, too

And less than half means, want more, to

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I need to know the truths I buy

From the discarded half-ones I pass by

Ones, little and white, wave us goodbye

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Music hangs me by a thread of cord

And hearing my song is what's been cored

Simultaneously, both plucks strike a chord

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The seductive aspects of love, I'll

Peruse item-by-item on that intangible aisle

And together we'll defend, to the death, our isle

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The man who is bowling, efforts, gutter-balled

Is the man who, madly, has always bawled

For the hair denied him, on his life, bald

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Restitution and justice, say I

Are nothing more than an eye-for-an-eye

All those who agree, saying nothing, say "Aye!"

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Discordancy is the tune of a lyre

Played by the musicianship of the liar

The chorus includes both the in-tune and outlier

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The wise man will, good omens, seize

When lost upon his stormy seas

And fear not the horizon he sees

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I find respite in rural idyll

The shepherd who toils, my bucolic idol

But soon he scorns his labors as, I, remain idle

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Gerard DiLeo

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  • Berry Driven2 years ago

    so thought-provoking. Time to sit in my corner now.

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Clever wordplay 😁

  • Oh wow! Your rhymes and word play here was so brilliant!

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Very good, as usual. Great idea for a poem. English definitely has some quirks. It's a bit different to what you've done here with homonyms but I always like the -ough words for how English is a little bit bonkers.

  • Rob Angeli2 years ago

    Amazing imagery all throughout, a kind of slashy charm to the rhyme. I especially like "Discordancy is the tune of a lyre Played by the musicianship of the liar The chorus includes both the in-tune and outlier" Much to be said about the craft and its effect, excellent poetizing!

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