Other Ways to Say It
The gnu who knew

I want to halve my cake and eat it, two
For twice as much makes it seem more, too
And less than half means, want more, to
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I need to know the truths I buy
From the discarded half-ones I pass by
Ones, little and white, wave us goodbye
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Music hangs me by a thread of cord
And hearing my song is what's been cored
Simultaneously, both plucks strike a chord
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The seductive aspects of love, I'll
Peruse item-by-item on that intangible aisle
And together we'll defend, to the death, our isle
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The man who is bowling, efforts, gutter-balled
Is the man who, madly, has always bawled
For the hair denied him, on his life, bald
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Restitution and justice, say I
Are nothing more than an eye-for-an-eye
All those who agree, saying nothing, say "Aye!"
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Discordancy is the tune of a lyre
Played by the musicianship of the liar
The chorus includes both the in-tune and outlier
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The wise man will, good omens, seize
When lost upon his stormy seas
And fear not the horizon he sees
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I find respite in rural idyll
The shepherd who toils, my bucolic idol
But soon he scorns his labors as, I, remain idle
About the Creator
Gerard DiLeo
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Comments (6)
so thought-provoking. Time to sit in my corner now.
Clever wordplay 😁
Oh wow! Your rhymes and word play here was so brilliant!
Very good, as usual. Great idea for a poem. English definitely has some quirks. It's a bit different to what you've done here with homonyms but I always like the -ough words for how English is a little bit bonkers.
This is excellent! While reading I felt as though Emily Dickinson and Shakespeare were in the same room!
Amazing imagery all throughout, a kind of slashy charm to the rhyme. I especially like "Discordancy is the tune of a lyre Played by the musicianship of the liar The chorus includes both the in-tune and outlier" Much to be said about the craft and its effect, excellent poetizing!