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Oneirodynia

5-9-2025

By Ellie HoovsPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

They laid me to sleep

in a coffin made of glass

lined with velvet apologies

thinking I'd dream of oceans

or forgiveness

or that one perfect nectarine

I'd dropped in 2003.

The ceiling shattered

while a symphony played

... wolves chasing Peter,

and me.

They chewed on my ankle -

wearing a voice that once prayed for me.

My nerves bloomed bruises.

My hands turned to questions,

tossing runes to the laughing sky

that held no answers.

My skin peeled,

old wall paper from worn bones,

regret curling

smoke above untended altars.

This is what it must mean

to be haunted by your own heartbeat,

to taste rust on your tongue,

with feet that remember

what a mind will not admit.

Love letters delivered in salt,

signed in static,

that simply read

"Persephone,

come home."

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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  • Marilyn Glover9 months ago

    Ellie, without doubt or hesitation, this is absolutely one of my favorite poems I've ever seen on Vocal. Beautifully haunting, reaching right into the soul!

  • Lia D. Elen9 months ago

    This is such a vivid and haunting piece—BEAUTIFULLY surreal! I really admire how you’ve woven memory, myth, and emotion together so seamlessly. As someone who loves Greek mythology and all things fantasy and ethereal, lines like “my hands turned to questions, tossing runes to the laughing sky” and that final “Persephone, come home” truly showcase how picturesque and evocative your use of language is. It really does read like a haunting dream that lingers long after waking. I’m genuinely touched that a word I shared could play a part in inspiring something this powerful. BEAUTIFUL 🤌🤌🤌🌹

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Wonderful creation

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