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On the surface

What do you see?

By Phil LovellPublished 4 years ago 1 min read

I wish I could marvel at the lake

Ripples move aside just for my sake

They ought to hold me in some trance

The way they vibrate, scatter and dance

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Shimmering colours collide like drunk lovers

Clumsy and wet under bluesky covers

They ought to gleam and bounce off my eye

When sunset throws blankets of burnt peach dye

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Upon this postcard paradise water

There’s only one thing my heart is drawn to

My surface reflection, hypnotic to me

Nature’s got nothing on vanity

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Phil Lovell

As someone who never really connected with poetry, I have been suprised to discover how much I enjoy writing it. It gives me an avenue to explore the philosophical side of my thinking, and explore my creativity a little. I hope you enjoy!

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