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On A Train

Watching Time Pass

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
On A Train
Photo by Lucio Patone on Unsplash

The trees whizz by like lightning

Or shooting stars up in the sky

Sitting here reclining

Writing rhymes, to pass the time

Upfront a baby babbles

As the sun peeks through the blinds

The people, much like scrabble tiles

Different worlds different lives

All come together in this moment

Some smiling as the wander by

Another vast assortment

Of people who touch my life

A few short, fleeting hours

Most I will never see again

My eyes, their faces scour

As I travel on this train

Momentary meetings

That temporarily makes me think

Will my solitary greeting

Expose the me I want for them to meet

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Lovely poem. I think you meant they instead of the at one point. Still beautiful though!

  • I have met so many wonderful humans on trains throughout Europe. I love the feeling you recount; spread good nature and hope in humanity ❤️

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a year ago

    This sounded so melodious, I loved it. And it is about real life, which makes it even more awesome.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is beautiful, and relatable.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    You sure give a great impression of a train trip. Good work.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Lovely poem, Kelli. I like the idea of musing the idle moments on a train. Reminds me of the many train trips I took when I lived in Germany, my happiest travel memories.

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Nicely done it.

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Exceptional piece, enjoyed it

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