Before Our Story Changed
Breakup Nonet
By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
To die in your arms, my one desire
But time robs us all, stole the flames
From our fire. It changed the scene
Rearranged everything
Rewrote the ending
Of you and me
Remember
Me that
Way
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Excellent storytelling
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Comments (11)
Loved it!
So good !!!
So poignantly beautiful! Loved this so much
I believe this the first break up Nonet I have read in which time is the antagonist. Both beautifully written and deeply sad, Kelli!
Oh. So tragic!
This one had a really beautiful and natural flow.. Very sad too.
Oh my, this is so sad. Beautiful piece, my friend.
Oh, it's a tricky way to soothe us after breaking up!!!!! Liked.
I really tried to find a favorite line in this, but the fact is, it all works together beautifully. Well done, Kelli!
Awesome ,time is ebbing away and wait for nobody, it favourable to some people and unfavourable to some
Beautifully written Kelli.