There was once a man called Ollie
Who bought himself an old dolly
It had a mean face
Was covered in lace
He died of shock when it ate a lolly
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (7)
Cute!!!
Oh fun!
I totally forgot what a limerick is, thanks for reminding me. That could be our next challenge. Such fun. The doll scared me. Dhar would love this, she's got a dark talent.
You creeped me right out with that one!!! Fun wording though :) I can see why Dharrsheena featured it in the horror group. Great work!
Not the best choice before bed. Lol. Nice work Paul
Ooooo, dark and creepy the way i like it!
Lol. Good one.