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cigarette smoke dance
minor keys by heavy hands
ride that soul rhythm
About the Creator
Oneg In The Arctic
A queer storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
Water is Life ✊
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Comments (9)
🔥 Go Oneg!
This felt so rhythmic, I love it. It does a great job of capturing the essence of the blues. Well done.
I felt so cool reading it, lol. This was truly excellent :)
Gosh this was brilliant!
Excellent!
A wonderful musical haiku
Good one. You've captured the essence of the blues.
Brilliant!!!
Excellent. I could feel that.