Oh, yeah!
That feels so good.
I love that.
Keep going…
Don’t stop.
A little to the left.
Right there!
You know just what to do.
Oh, yeah! You’ve almost got me.
You're getting me so wet.
Yes, yes!
You got me!
As your garden, I thank you for watering me!
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Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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By LUCCIAN LAYTH6 days ago in Critique
Comments (7)
Very cheeky.
Ha ha, couldn't wait for the climax... Well done!
Such a fun and unexpected piece! The rhythm pulls you in, and the final line lands perfectly.
Hehe, I was wondering where that was going lol
Good one!!!
Ola la la 💋
Ha ha! Naughty…but nice 😁