by Pierre Voisin (Instagram: @daily_minimal)
Every now and then I fall apart. Oh moon,
comfort me how you comfort the mourners.
Let me bury my burning face
in the darkness of your shoulder. Oh moon,
please don't let them
see their constant go to pieces. Don't let them see how
every now and then I fall apart. Oh, moon.
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Comments (8)
such a lovely and one of the best writers i have seen out here, keep up the good work
Truly beautiful! Although I understand your approach on this, I feel I must say that we all have the liberty to fall apart (definitely the resources and reasons to😉)and I don’t think we should be ashamed of it. Sharing emotions will always help and make things easier!
Love how you’ve gone for the eclipse concept, and personified the sun Ava! “ Let me bury my burning face in the darkness of your shoulder.” is a great piece of imagery🤗
Really, really wonderfully composed piece, and so meaningful!
Beautiful entry. Well done.
Oh, Ava. See what I did there? This was stunning. I like that you went "there" with the opening line. Well done on a great entry.
Beautiful take on the eclipse!✅
On point for today!!!! Love it! So sweet and universal!!🙌🙌