Ode to Pleasure
A religious poem describing addiction and deliverance stylized after the rhythmic poetry in "Paradise Lost" or "Pilgrim's Progress"

It came one day, on life’s narrow way
That a song fell on my ear
Its pleasant sound did quite resound
And beckoned me come and hear
At once I turned, hoping to learn
The words of the songster’s tune
And thus he came, and that sweet refrain
He began again to croon:
---
“I promise thee naught
but joy thus wrought
From all life’s richest wells,
To drink, to see, to feel, to be
These are my hedon spells;
From one glad show to the next you’ll go
With desires e’er before thy eyes;
All life thou shalt tread ne’er once tasting dread
Nor fear, not tears, nor lies
No wrong can I do, for to bring joy to you
Is my Chieftain’s goal and aim
Know I of no other way, yet of this I say
For PLEASURE is my name.”
---
The song was sweet and didst repeat
Itself on endless strain
Till thus did I be hypnotized
By its e’er repeating ‘frain
Again he did say, while leading away
Me from the path below,
And deeper still we went until
The road no longer showed
And yet did I, with glassy eye,
Follow without a thought
Of where life’s wells might thusly dwell
Or what the pleasures’ cost!
Day by day he led the way
Through forests thick and dark
And all along the joyous song
I from perfidious lips did hark:
---
“I promise thee naught but joy thus wrought
From all life’s richest wells,
To drink, to see, to feel, to be
These are my hedon spells;
From one glad show to the next you’ll go
With desires e’er before thy eyes
All life thou shalt tread ne’er once tasting dread
Nor fear, not tears, nor lies
No wrong can I do, for to bring joy to you
Is my Chieftain’s goal and aim
Know I of no other way, yet of this I say,
For PLEASURE is my name.”
---
Yet as we went on, it came with his song
That a curious hap did rise
For the tune that once had captured my trust
Seemed now but hell’s disguise
The strains of joy that once did employ
Every sense and every thought
Now were to me much darker be
With evil and terror fraught
Yet too far gone from the path I was on
Was I now to turn around
So followed I still this warbling shrill
Though wincing at every sound
For now was no doubt what the song was about
Not of desire, but of lies
To tangle and maim, to harm and to lame
Was pleasure’s plan for I!
---
Stranded and lost, suddenly the cost
Of lapsed judgment filled my frame
With terror unknown, my heart deadly groaned
As the songster called my name
“Quiet, thou fool! Thy master cruel
Hast now thy life in hand
With chains thou to bind, no one will find
Thy soul in this foul land!”
What once was light now showed forth night
As he continued his wicked strains
And thus he bound me all around,
His cords melodic ‘frains
The glad guarantee, which once lured me
Off the path so straight and true
Now bound me tight in the depths of night
To late its deceit I knew
I fought and strained, ‘twas all in vain
The binds held taut in restraint
So thus I cried and sorrowed and sighed
Til my heart itself grew faint
And all the while a sinister smile
Crept ‘cross my captor’s face
And all the time the chanted rhyme
Ceased not its mortal pace:
---
“I promise thee naught but joy thus wrought
From all life’s richest wells,
To drink, to see, to feel, to be
These are my hedon spells;
From one glad show to the next you’ll go
With desires e’er before thy eyes;
All life thou shalt tread ne’er once tasting dread
Nor fear, not tears, nor lies
No wrong can I do, for to bring joy to you
Is my Chieftain’s goal and aim
Know I of no other way, yet of this I say,
For PLEASURE is my name.”
---
To stop my ears, to cease to hear
His voice was futile try
For no matter how I struggled now
I couldst not stop his cry
Still on I strove, in that wicked grove
To fight my own way free
But try as I could, the chains still stood
Cold shackles of melody
Alas I bowed my head, and in darkest dread,
And the depths of deep despair
Made one final choice and with last threads of voice
Whispered a desperate prayer
---
And though my words were barely heard
For pain had quenched my tongue
I noticed how, for the first time now
My captor no longer sung
Could it be? Could I be free
Simply from uttering a cry
To One above, whose throne is love,
Who might look, even, upon I?
I armed by faith, my woeful wraith
Looked but pitiable to behold
For as I prayed, the chains decayed
And the binds did quite erode
Soon the sound of shaking ground
Came quickly to our ear
And the lion’s roar on the air did soar
And filled my foe with fear
Sweat and strain and unutterable pain
Showed plainly on his face
The song of his tongue forever done
Overcome by heaven's grace
One word He spake, and with that did make
My foe forever flee
The chains at my feet, our gaze now did meet
As He turned Himself toward me
At first I did dread to look at that head
And gaze into His eyes
But when He looked at me, no angst did I see
And oh, what glad surprise!
For only grace was upon His face
No judgment did I see
Only a love so true, as I had never knew
That assured me I was free
Safe from harm within His arms
He carried me onward through
The forest glade, all while He made
Me hear His love so true
I thus revived, we didst arrive
Back at the narrow lane
Where resumed my trip once doomed,
Now free of guilt and strain
Joy and light, both e’er so bright
Now assuage my every fear
And no more does the strain of pleasure’s refrain
Fall enticingly on my ear
For heaven's song now lead me on
Down this path on which I tread,
With mercies new, its words ever true,
Lead to my eternal home ahead.
About the Creator
Emily Grimm
My inspirations are often drawn from personal experience, observation, and daydreams from my childhood growing up in the Rust Belt. I love using words to paint vast mental landscapes and take readers on grand adventures!


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